Skull Piano
Odin hangs from the street lamp…
his skull is a keyhole
and falls in fierce droplets
upon the ivory keys
piano fills the room...
and sins are buried;
(here the father killed the son)
the coffin is put to rest
in my head
piano,
wipe away the birthmark
on that dark man's head
come with your fingernails
come with your moons...
women.
my skull feels like rain
Odin hangs from the street lamp…
his skull is a keyhole
'o let us all pray...
...your skull turns to rainand falls in fierce droplets
upon the ivory keys
piano fills the room...
and sins are buried;
(here the father killed the son)
the coffin is put to rest
in my head
piano,
wipe away the birthmark
on that dark man's head
'o let me pray...
women,the night in my jaws,
I am ready
I am ready
come with your fingernails
come with your moons...
women.
my skull feels like rain
'...that jazz kills the day.
Amen.[note: Legend has it that Odin offered himself for sacrifice in order to gain knowledge. For nine days, he hung upside down from the World Tree. Wounded and without food, he meditated. In the end he saw light and acquired knowledge from the runes that had fallen from the tree. The HANGED MAN card in the tarot deck reflects his story.]
8 comments:
interesting...the subject is a legend..handled smhow in a nice O.E (old english) strain...a surrender and a repeated chanting to close in the effect...
the sounds come out like those heard in the church piano...low n deep...nice.
Odin is also the God of poetry, isn't he?
To be honest this particular poem of urs is like a Jackson Pollock painting ;).
do you know who's the guy playing the piano in the pic?
whoa.. this poem is a distinct move away from your other poems
i did know the Odin legend.... but using it as a motif for this poem.. nice
P.s: this pop up thing is difficult to navigate....
and you ahve more or less stopped visiting my blog altogether
:D
the poetry is extremely well handled...
with a mythical theme and a beautiful use of prosaic words....
its awesome!!
Viking folklore and poetry... great combination, mate!
Mystic and entrancing!
Keep it up, dude!
Cheers.
Have you considered getting your work published? you should .. seriously.
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