The Blood Song
I know this blood…
It was spilled
a million nights ago…
It’s come back again,
it hangs
from the claws
of the song…
the song carries faces too,
of lovers breathing
in the white geometry
of the city…
and I know that song
all too well…
it tells
of the longing
for murder and sleep…
an animal longing
that seizes you by the neck
on full moon nights…
that noise
that noise
...and sometimes, the city vanishes
from my body…
and I am left with
a superhero in silhouettes
racing into the night…
but at other times,
the ping-pong dies
in her lips
and the blood song emerges
from the breast
of the angel…
then I bow before his singing
I murder and sleep.
5 comments:
Dude, in a word: haunting.
I don't think I have to say much, aye? But, guess I will anyways... :)
Another enthralling and gripping poem from the wizard... guess, I'll spend a few more mins trying to recover. :O
Kudos, boss.
Cheers,
-Johnny Deep.
I could almost feel the song taking over... sometimes it feels there runs a million things through your veins... and all of them at once. I love the vividness of the images here, and it leaves one with so many crimson tinted images... of full moon nights...of the white geometry of the city... of a superhero in silhouettes...
This poem is perhaps not as complex as the earlier pieces, but it is as unique... I loved it.
Gasp!!!
That was intense...
The imagery dragged me into the heart of the poem...And the poem has an amazing flow...it eddied around my consciousness, made me numd and towed me through the veins of the expression...
It was absolutely speaking!
Loved it...
Keep it up!
a lingering familiarity....
and a dark deep observation.....
different.
too depressing..
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