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If man is dust

those who go through the plain

are men



- Apparition, Octavio Paz, trans. Eliot Weinberger



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Sunday 27 June 2010

Notes - II








Notes - II

1.

Abrupt breeze
Inside the heart
Of this tungsten evening,

Voices of love
Across time’s storylines,

Supergod breathes upon the ellipse
Of your memory

Lunar triangles awaken now.


2.

The noiseless call,
The white opera,

I hear.

In the temple of the Buddha,
All be free,

In his electric house,
All be music.

I hear.

In a violet cadence,
The hills throb.

3.

Night and rains,

Dust from another city
Becomes alive,
A room of indigo animals.

You measure the pace
Of my love,
With a gauge on your tongue.

Sunshine lungs,
Street song diaries,

I touch
Your hand, fierce angel;
Won’t you tremble?


4.

[ on a bandh day ],

The stores are mostly closed,

Parlours with pretty names
Stare into an empty world,

One or two half-opened shutters
Of shops
Which sell cigarettes;

The stillness of murder and protest
Is broken by children,

The thud
Of an orange soccer ball,
And cricket on wild afternoon slopes.

I wander around
Under a gold sky
With a camera,
By churches, newspapermen
And rough graffiti,

I can’t find a place to buy dinner.

5.

Haze and I,
The house where flowers grew,

The house which breathed
In slow movements
Of the stars,

Now it rains, now the jade fairies go crazy
And celebrate
The birth of love with rice;

Suleiman is speaking to jinns again.

8 comments:

The Sunflower Collective said...
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T. Mukherjee said...

As usual, no matter what the theme is, the poem is refreshing. In its own way.
Loved it.

Diptanjan Sarma Purkayastha said...

Beautiful.
I touch/ Your hand, fierce angel;/ Won't you tremble?
Beautiful.
A brilliant poem. :)

Inam said...

Thank you Goirick, Twish and Diptanjan! :) Cheers and good luck.

Deeptesh said...

You've reached a different metaphysical plane. Both as a poet and as a human being.

Poetry said...

Very good detailed poem.

Anonymous said...

Code of the Moon.
Elemental Markers.

Changes Feel.Time.Beliefs.
Stores.Discards.
Walks,
Earth.

Gathers sand places in palms.
Stirs.Eyes Close.Predicts.
Hears.Breathes.Calm.Unrestful.
Comes home to Personal Element.
Water.

?
Fire.

?
Air.

The Fifth Element?
Well,
Quinta Essentia. :)

Inam said...

Thanks Deeptesh :)

Thanks unitedworldpoets

Thank you Sheelonee, love what you wrote, Quinta Essentia it is!