Saturday, 15 December 2007
The Winter Jazz
The Winter Jazz
winter charges the clocks
with a magic
that is otherwise found
in the hooves of unicorns
look out your window
and watch that dwarf
dangle from the hands
of one such clock
he looks like
a boy ran from home
to play videogame
inside the giant clock
sits his mother,
cigarette in hand
and unicorns in the eye;
she died sitting-
the mother of all winter stories.
and now the hands of the clock
cold and gloved
lift the dwarf to 1 o' clock
and teach him the secret of videogames.
warm and woolen,
you kneel in your room
and remember girls
with uncommon names
who bury their wombs
every winter.
“mother,
are you a ghost,
or are you a unicorn?”
“I am a ghost
dining on unicorns.”
at that thin reply,
the dwarf bares his hooves
and breaks
into the wet viscera
of the clock
inside, he clicks on doors and corridors.
and liberates the girls,
with very uncommon names,
from the al capone look-alike,
he finds them kneeling,
in their polygons
of terror and chocolate
It’s always like this in virtual poems.
Posted by Inam at 00:43
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17 comments:
and the game began
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pockta, pocketa ,poceta....
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Exceptionally Good ....
Good! Extremely!
Has uncanny resonances (not similarities!) with a poem written by me which was entirely different though...I can't figure where and how...did you read this (the second poem) Inam? Will like your comments...
Will quote this one in a next post...
"I am a ghost, dining on unicorns"...... gotta be one of your best lines......
Dreamlike...very nice.
Unicorns have a thing for the uninitiated tho!
Absolutely brilliant.
The sheer fluidity of your shifting metaphors makes the poem one of its kind...
[And thanks for the visit. Am linking you up from my blog...]
I mean from where do you get these amazing lines of yours?
Simply AWESOME!!
a sense of disbelief at the random images creates a different sort of an effect
i will quote hungarian aesthete georg lukacs " looking beyond the palpable"
Okay Inam; I promised you. Quoted you profusely in my latest post. Go here: Self-portrait in Blood
This reminds me of the Grimm brothers.
=P
i couldnt resist !i had to come back to check this out!..
u make winter magical.. i really wonder in disbelief everytime i read ur writing how the hell u get these images.. its incredible..
specially the mixing up of folk, legend with grim morbid darkness, n then a dash of the present..
like the unicorn,dwarf,death n then the videogames!.. fuck, its incredible!..the fluidity that is.. the way they merge!..
except that just for once id like to see a brilliant piece that is minus death n the morbidity!
nonetheless,brilliant takw on winter, n obviously, one of my latest favourites of yours!..
keep writin!
Nice...
the last line...
the very last.
@ Adreeka: I'll borrow this from Satyajit Ray, who said it to someone who asked him once why his films had so much death in them - "Because there is so much death in life" .
But yes you have made me start to think!!! I think I will do it, write a poem without death. Would be a good experiment. Let's see if I can write one soon :)
i loved the dialogue between the dwarf and his mother...the imagery is beautiful!...
but the last line is just up there!
beautiful...
i'm glad!.. go ahead.. i'll wait for the next one!.. :)
this one was worth waiting for and as always I am speechless....
like listening to forbidden stories and enjoying them
a purple shadowed giant clock, and medusa-like tresses of the mother that edge out of the frame...unexplained foetuses cast out from the bodies they belong to...I wish I had more colours and skill when I tried doing this piece justice.
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