Love Song from Pluto
Girl of bullet, sweat and neon
you turn upon that bed again,
your body a garden of myths
where children play
with brick, sand and masks
you call out to them,
like every night,
before your dream turns to snow
the poet from Pluto
is on the prowl again
and gifts you
a skull of mist and guitar
he says he is a traveler of lands
where cave-paintings abound
the children love the sound
of his brown guitar
and leave their play
to make him a crown of glass
but he offers no history,
only the mist of war
then your body talks to the owl
that perched on your table
a decade back
your body speaks
of magnificent poems
written in brick and embrace,
but the owl warns of new nightmares.
you rise up,
and change your head for the skull
and set out to find the poet
he is cycling
in the outskirts
of your garden of myth and sweat
but he knows you are coming
again
to hear his bastard prophecies
he knows you smell a lot like
the guitar shop
of his childhood, brown and strange,
girl of bullet, sweat and neon.
Tuesday, 1 January 2008
Love Song from Pluto
Posted by Inam at 19:23
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here's to a beautiful mind..its oddities and brilliance :cheers !
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and keep exploring the corners of your body for all the hidden poems cuz it makes the rest of us go mad and their resonances live on like patterns in the head.....
it is, ofcourse, brilliant. but moreso its really stirring.. im so happy theres no death :) see, you can explore morbidness without death.
p.s. im very glad you used pluto, its my favourite planet ;)
obviously stunning!
"the poet from Pluto
is on the prowl again"
Or is it Park Circus?
Loved the unique theme.
Brilliant as usual! And one of those rare pieces where I discerned certain personal reverberations........
Beautiful " Love Song from Pluto" poetry! Wish I can write like that! :)
*sigh*
A little less dark than most of your other ones. But I wonder why Pluto? Because it is cold, far,distant,mysterious?
'on the outskirts of your garden of myths'...is a brilliant line,evokes a lot of images.
"you turn upon that bed again,
your body a garden of myths
where children play"-- unbelievable stanza...without the fourth line
-Tina
Great work.
These are beautiful, these poems. Though he doesn't write like you at all, I think you might find William Butler Yeats interesting. His poetry is dizzying, and he's fascinated by the occult. I've just finished reading a book he wrote with Edwin J. Ellis in which they try to make sense of William Blake's prophetic books. It's an audacious (and difficult) work, arguing that Blake writes to an occult symbolic system.
Lovely! My first visit to your blog and I am floored.
You write beautifully!
Shall come again;-)
inam,
i have read you, on and off, over some years now and i would pick these: "then your body talks to the owl
that perched on your table
a decade back"
for an epitaph.
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