Outerspace

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If man is dust

those who go through the plain

are men



- Apparition, Octavio Paz, trans. Eliot Weinberger



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Tuesday, 26 February 2008

9 Moons


[Ashes, Munch]


9 Moons


1.

my fingers are blades
that slice mythologies

my fingers also worship your thighs.

2.

words are an orgy
in the castle
she built with her eyes,

tonight she may declare war
against the lovers
from dusty epics

tonight she may draw out
the noose of lyrics
that has been lying for long
in her closet

among the laces
from her third wedding.

3.

let the camera
sink like a stone
in the lake at moonshine

let my axe sink
into the moon man’s wooden legs

let us all watch the movie
in funereal silence.

4.

old man from Pluto,
you are the monarch
of all the windows in the city

your torn body
was always a friend
to war pilots

who landed in obscure forests
and heard the voice
of sacred lions.

5.

february turns in your ears
like a choir warning
of love and treason

wash her feet
wash her torn feet,
with the storm
you stole from the ektara

let her sing
to the ship that carries away her sleep
in many tiny boxes of rich wood.

6.

when your voice
crawls up ancient towers
of stone or bones

and is heard
in far away rivers, railway yards
and cities with cold asylums,

I know your womb
is charged then
with a foetus of rain

and that
you are invulnerable at last,
my acid girl..

7.

when you slaughter a robot
at midnight,
its soul knows of it
only the morning after.

8.

there was sulphur in those eyes,
and a dooryard of blue lions

spies followed her
as she traversed the country of mirrors
with a secret code
in her spine

she would dine with the prince
in his castle of salt and war crafts
and reveal her code to him

but the troops of the stone king
swooped upon her
in the lane before my house in this city

I seized the radio,
turned to the moon,
and stretched out my arms like a lover

and when the bullet stroked her waist
she morphed into a fox
and took refuge
inside the moon radio.

The camera pans 9 days;

now, only I
have her code

now I have usurped
the prince’s spine,

and my spies tell me
they have seen her twice,
flying a war craft
over the Ganges.

9.

my fingers stroke the thousand moons

inside your body of
curly wet leaves.

my fingers also remember
to slice dictators.

14 comments:

Pongy Papaya said...

your mind is a blade that slices excellence giving it an out of the world meaning altogether.
tui 'montroshokti' porechish?
yes,u remind me of Ishwar Patuni.tor khomota ke choto korchi nah kintu...

Shyama said...

my thoughts are blades
that slice words

with visions also worship poetry

- in other words - beautiful

Tanushree said...

Well it felt like i entered d world full of bats n d worms wriggling all around n me being sliced down to pieces n d scarred body filled d sky with its syrupy oddity n i loved it...

Parjanya said...

Hmmm.....Good but a tad repetitive....and quite Inamish in certain ways (that is the highest compliment i can think of right now :))

Inam said...

@parjanya: yes, my world repeats, just like history and some dreams do.

An Extraordinary Life said...

your world is crazy & tempting & eerie & somewhere i'm glad to be everytime i read your poetry.. your world is a turn on! ;)

thanks for being a poet.

Anoo. said...

...we bend down to reach out from shadowy windows to touch this world that exists and breathes, a world that throbs inside the poet's soul...where each image is a myth unto itself... and each slice shrouded in secrecy... secrecy of mysterious love and kingdoms- and kingdoms of war and peace... but then the girl changes the fortune of princes when she plays with half-forgotten words... then we too step into your universe... and are willingly drenched in watercoloured myths.

Anonymous said...

it's a wee bit weird!

archetype said...

Absolutely amazing. Write lots more. Loved the 7th moon. I'll be adding a link to your blog on mine. Hope you don't mind.

Anonymous said...

n the girl must have had mystic fires and the moons must've been frosted in you...

Anonymous said...

I had always liked this poem. Gave me great joy to see it in the 8th Day section of The Statesman. Keep Going!! :)

loony girl said...

...shine on...

Somrita said...

I am gripped by a strange agony ...
she, who took refuge inside the moon radio ... and, flew the war craft over the Ganges ...
I again feel a complex numbness, spreading over burnt skin ...
Yes, we can commence a slaughter :)
" He who makes a beast of himself
gets rid of the pain of being a man "

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

Hmm...once again dark,flowing....the Edvard Munch painting adds to the effect.

Each reading improves the experience


Great work!!