1.
The door between
miracle and ruin
is always left ajar;
when the night
is in the grip of rain,
the poem slides down my hand
and fractures the floor,
beneath
lie the remains
of vampires and pirate ships
the sapphire beak of a bird
glows in the thin space
between you and I,
and the door, the door…
it quavers ever so slightly.
2.
White panthers in the waterfall,
their hunger echoes
among the hills
their hunger has the sound
of ten blue xylophones
flesh and stone
argue inside my hair and I resort to prayers…
time strips me of my clothes
Dinner is ready, and the song is tender.
3.
A sky of crocodile skin
greets me at dawn
I hide inside your night dress
and pray
for the war to end
“The lepers are singing again”,
you say,
“they are singing to the sun”
I look with longing at my thumb
and anoint it with oils,
like earth’s last hero,
I sacrifice my thumb to the leather sky,
and hide deeper
inside your manuscript of coal and dreams.
4.
So many years now,
so many stories
and pieces of midnight jazz;
these days,
when I speak,
only werewolves respond,
and you,
my lady of the gold mines,
you seem to have lost
your strange lust for salvation.
Tell me,
does music still remind you
of love and imaginary volcanoes?
does the sight of water
remind you of beautiful poets?
5.
it’s been a month
since the third world war began,
newspapers don’t reach here daily,
and the women
sell coffins and folk records
you choose this scenario
to smoke your leaves
you choose to call upon
an old mistress
to undress before you and fondle your ego
you choose to call a hot air balloon
and you survey the city
with a woman in your arms,
folk songs in your ears,
and brutal, dazzling ghosts in your mouth.
6.
with a flick of my finger,
the room changes colour
it becomes a chamber of trial,
and everyone pleads with the spider
for a while, I live on stolen time
my face pale, my mouth dry,
and my empire frozen;
almost half a century passes this way…
…in the end
the spider offers a grin,
the mutants are forgiven,
the room fills with a jungle scent,
and strange things happen.
.
11 comments:
Every time! Every f***ing single time!! How?
Brilliant will be an understatement for your poems.
hi I'm ur big fan.I'm well known to Debanjan da who is ur pal.will u read my poems on www.deepteshpoetry.blogspot.com and leave ur valued comments?I'd love 2 talk 2u!
Once, just once, I have to ask you to explain your thoughts as you write
these mystic poems of yours.
Do you see the imagery when you write them as we do?
Do you hear the voices as we do?
Ha! Of course you do..... You weave them.
As I read your poems, I see a myriad visions and hope to write a long comment on them, but just as I finish ...poof! it is gone, I cant write....
So you have to endure these inane comments.
The fourth part was a killer...I am off to read it again.
Cheerio!
@arachnid: Now I am gtting scared :-O What if it doesnt happen next time?!?!
@deeptesh: thanks! I will check asap!
@sujoy: its such a very complex process. i really wish it was simpler, sigh. then I could have written more frequently. But then, i guess there is a time for everything, even for dreaming.
[olive]I wouldnt know how to comment .... although...
[i]flesh and stone
argue inside my hair and I resort to prayers…
[olive]and strange things happen while words so fluid encompass a person when he reads your poems...
Btw, its not that you're [i]brilliant...
[/i]Its just that .. you're a [i]poet.. :)
Smiles for you...
i came back to ask you to read my new poem,which i put up after so long.. and came across this...
a ghost poem, that reminds me of a world with a war in the distance and death in its soul... its like a prelude to a surreal plane which is about to creep in on us.. complete with the crocodile skinned sky... your imagery.. its so surreal but clear, as if the poet sees the truth in his poem and laughs silently at all those who come and try and decode them, decipher them, the stories and the voices that you weave into them..
intelligence and imagination.. brilliant assets to possess for a poet.. im waiting for your books to come out..! shall make you sign them for me!..
oh and yes do come and check out my poem too.. i miss your comments! =)
If poems be the food of life, write on.
Amen!!!
pagla hoe gechis re!
...and you,
my lady of the gold mines,
you seem to have lost
your strange lust for salvation.
Tell me,
does music still remind you
of love and imaginary volcanoes?
does the sight of water
remind you of beautiful poets?...
This almost reads like burying a half-painted sunset midst countless other unfinished sketches, and then someday perhaps, we gently prod the yellowed lines with oils...waiting for a miracle...
You have a definite style to your poetry. Often they are mystic, abstract with rustic charms. While reading, I was wondering how will you put the last stroke so that it holds on to the wonderful nonsensical sense it has been built over. And strange things happen.
The door between
miracle and ruin
is always left ajar;
Loved this stanza. Almost too good a realization.
Keep shining. God bless.
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