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Words on a Glass Frame
I.
alone,
my visions sway
between
reason and magic
calling your name softly,
I resurrect you
in this song,
our feet are wet again,
touching,
our ghosts
lost in the sun.
II.
daring dancers
on water,
time, piano, fall.
Wednesday, 15 April 2009
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This evokes a sense of voodoo surrealism.I like the soft magic in the second stanza.This one lights up the mind quietly....much like light evanescent thoughts.'Time' and 'light' add a whole new dimension.And the entire piece sways gently between magic and rationality .
why are the words inscribed on a glass frame? why not something more durable?
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Hi there!
This is my first time to visit this site! Very good imagery here! There is definitely something that the writer sees that we can't.... something more than the descriptions on this poem.
Thanks to Deeptesh I found cool poetry blogs.
Zorlone
Tales are written on mirror frames appear Illusive , making the difference between what's surreal and real blur. The words evoke both pleasure and pain.
u have started saying more by writing less it seems!! was a bit late reading this one. great.
This one reminds me of beaches...
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