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If man is dust

those who go through the plain

are men



- Apparition, Octavio Paz, trans. Eliot Weinberger



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Thursday, 7 May 2009

Roses for the Madhouse















Roses for the Madhouse


1.

night of bells and 
soldiers,

circles drawn or imagined
in blue light

my laughter spreads
from
dream to dream

lie down by my side
in this 
valley of sounds

and listen to my confessions,
covered
in sand and rose.

2.

naked or in ornaments,
the prayer looks
for a way

through flowers and
electromagnets

through
the ruins of our strange affair

the prayer
looks for a way

to remove the dust
of  nights
from 
our eyes

soft wooden
nights, 
haunted gardens,

and sea waves that answered 
to our white call, 
last August.

3.

roses
in the eyes of the new born,

leaves in the wind,

a city of peace
shining

call me by another name.

4.

miracles in the rain,

I discover you
at dawn,

on a bridge across
the blue layers
of time 
and song

faith of the phoenix.

5.

you speak to animals
with touch 

you survey the secrets
of glow worms

bride of heat,

we meet as the earth 
puts to rest
its
questions

of love and fury.

6.

haunted
by my own songs,

running from the cavemen
who live in
these poems,

who make sudden noises
in the corners
of sleep,

I wonder
if I should write
even a word more

who should I blame
for these scenes from a mad mansion?

7.

spring time.

forgive.

desire and 
third thoughts.

forgive.

a rebellion in chains.

forgive.

ruthless your art.

forgive.

the last colour
of peace.


8.

snow 
in your eye,

milk horoscopes

forget my stories

summer shall bring
a woodpecker
in blue.








 



12 comments:

Saima Afreen said...

Hey,Inam! This is hauntingly beautiful...Amazing..

Danny said...

beautiful...disturbingly so...and yet so very soothing...

"and listen to my confessions,
covered
in sand and rose."

love these lines.


summer did bring a wood pecker in blue...

rajdeep bhattacharya said...

through flowers and
electromagnets

through
the ruins of our strange affair
loved the style, flow,emotions,
ya the all in all the best package

Shahwar Kibria said...

""who should I blame
for these scenes from a mad mansion?

faith of the phoenix.""

"enigma"...relief...wondrous...cathartic...poetry...poetry...poetry!

ti's, your poem, ti's a gem!

Xpressions said...

"and listen to my confessions,
covered
in sand and rose."

wow!

actually dis mad mansion dwells in all of us...ur work makes me think.
Like always,ur work is striking, mesmerizing.

Deeptesh said...

Eerie and sublime.A bit nostalgic in terms of flashbacks.Great voodoo imageries in here.I also loved the wide gamuts and series of flickering images.

Unknown said...

Should i call you Ishmael Inam!!???felt a strange kind of circling halo inside my bones..gosh!!
and what happend to the moon last august inam??

Anonymous said...

Loved it in parts, found it beautiful and disturbing in others. And then there were electromagnets which I simply didn't get!

Ishani Shambhobi Ghosh said...

u're gettin dere.

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

Quite a long one by your standards.
Liked it for the way in which it spewed abstract images of redemptions and reunions.
Some parts appealed more than the others stanzas 1 and 7 for instance.

Anoo. said...

through
the ruins of our strange affair


and I am stuck here, I keep repeating this unfinished line to myself and I can't forget it, nor move on.

Elendil said...

Parts of this poem are just sheer genius.

'miracles in the rain,
I discover you at dawn,
on a bridge across the blue layers of time and song'

This stanza is lovely. Haunting imagery. Lovely alliteration.